This is great! I would love to read more of this!

You know, this is entirely your fault. I never wanted to get into the HP fanfics, but since I read the rest of your stuff I had to read this. Now I'm on the search for other good stories. Brief, but very well written. You gave just enough detail to give us a good setting and managed to give us a look into the inner workings of well rounded characters. I applaud you.

Aww, is this finished?

I hope it isn't, it's getting horribly interesting. And the way both James and Lily are portrayed is something I'd like to see more of. :3

I adored this story! You certainly have a way with words. Will you be updating this, or will it only be these two chapters?

=)Dede

is this story complete? because if it's not, you are unfairly marking it so.

Update soon please!

That was a very good story, I found it interesting!
I liked the part when James said that Sirius was going to kill him for having fun without him, it was funny.
I hope that you will have a good day!

I loved it!

Great story! By the way, isn´t the tunnel supposed to end in Zonnko´s jokeshop. Because in HP Halfbloodprine, Fred and George mentioned that they would have given Ron his birthday present, and that they were trying to buy Zonko´s. Part of it because of the sale, and also because of the passage...

I not sure..

Beautifully written,
and no details were missed.
Only one question.

When will you update??

I have not liked James/Lily stories until now. If there's any way you could do more, I for one would love it!

Interesting two chapters - I look forward to reading the rest.

i think the could use a third chapter!
just one more, please!

its really well written, and not as cliche. i dont knwo why but i find when i read alot of L/J stories, lilys friends always seem so cliche like either they are female marauders or they absoluetly hate the marauders or are in love and each gets together with one. i like that they are kind of friendly here, kind of like casual friends.

i definitely wanna see more L/J fics from you though!

Friendly reminder: It's staring not starring. :)

Other than that, I liked it. :)

Wow! I love your talent for writing stories/fanfiction! I was surprised to find a Harry Potter fanfic on your site...For some reason, I haven't been receiving my alerts from ...Glad I decided to check on a few of my fav authors! ^_^ Thanks for sharing your stories with us! I enjoy them very much! *HUGS*