O...are we getting a visit from Miss Martha Jones? Can't wait for more of this. More please!

Aww. I'm sorry.
It was very nice, though. At least, if it wasn't, I couldn't tell. My brain is broken through fanfic-spammage and I keep trying to hide, but updates keep chasing mee... -hides-

The title of the story is a good one for this chapter. The little electrite is a strange little thing.
More please.
Judy

Okay, so I read 'her' and immediately my little shipper heart called out 'Rose'. I'm so sad... =P
More please, I can't bear to wait! It's brilliant!

~AzureFalls

O_O OMG, I want a mini!Ianto! =D
Brilliant! Can't help but notice the last update date though. *flutters eyelashes* Update soon? Any chance? Pwease?

Love it! ^_^

~AzureFalls

What?! After all my pleading for you to make this into a stand-alone story, how has it taken me this long to find it?!
Must... read... on... =D

~AzureFalls

I find the girl a little frightening too. But I like her eyes. :)

I don't know, I think Jack and the Kitchen Sink could have a very nice relationship. :)


WELL DONE! :) I'm favoriting this. Just so you know. :)

Yay, the Girl has her own series! :) I'm writing down all the riddles she says, just to see if I can figure it all out.


...I don't think it's going to help me much. :)

well first ill take the jelly baby (munch)
and does the mini!!ianto! come with mini!!stopwatch!! ?

i like this, and why no pairings?
i think a little bit of jack innuendo is ok cause that is his personality

ciao, love it

thanks =)
lovin' it
oh "georgie-porgie, puddin' and pie, kissed the girls and made them cry. when the boys came out to play georgie-porgie ran away"
TEE HEE!
i so see what you mean
it must have been hard to come up with all those rhymes, nd to make them all have meaning
do you like Gwen?
i hate her, she is so annoying!
and she did all those things to ryse!
who do you like?

I'm intrigued and want to know more.

I had a feeling you were going to make this its own story. You were coming up with the parts of it too fast to just leave it in "What If..."
Happy New Year.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

hm
i'm intrigued.
update!!

oh...Cool i like it
update soon please this is fab!
xx

I get the impression her ryhmes mirror the actions she sees...ie the mary lamb...Ianto leading the lamb following... I'm curious...some of that from Lewis Carrol?