As I'm discovering reading your work, you clearly have a knack for writing JJ, and a firm grasp of David - and who doesn't want a firm grasp on him, but I digress... ;-D

I liked the story idea, and right out of the gate it's easy to relate to - everyone has had one of those days that go from fine to horrible almost faster that you can process. It doesn't matter if you work at the FBI or the local gas station, some experiences are common to everyone. It's nice to go 'Yup, that's how I'd feel' when you read a story. I'll never know what it's like to profile a killer, but I know what it's like to kick off your shoes when you walk in the door after one of those days.

This is a favourite I will come back to. :-D

Thank you and take care!

Now, that's what I need after a bad day at work! I love the last few lines about Strauss!

Wow, David can be the sweetest man in the world. Great job tonnie.

A very lovely warms my heart to see how Dave comfort a very sad amazing ..

Your beautiful stories never fail to amaze me! Keep writing!

Tracia

Beautiful writing, excellent development. Not that I would expect anything less from you! You are totally spoiling us.

Susan