Sarah uncomfortable? Leaning towards the comic cannon, are we?

Jim made it in time for what? Breakfast with the family?

I found this chapter slightly on the amusing side, Jim musing on his life, his situation, and his dealings with the Batman. I love Jim, especially Gary Oldman-Jim, he became Gordon.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next installment. TTFN

Maybe things will be alright, indeed. :) I'm glad Renee does have an ally, even if Gordon can't admit it too openly.

I love Gordon, and I'm enjoying Officer Montoya as well. Gret work, as usual.

Going with comic cannon with Essen and Gordon?

Did Batman do that out of some form of humor, or what?

OMG, WOW! I LOVE Gordon, Barbara and Catwoman, and you've got all 3! So perfectly written as well! I SO enjoyed this, you have a wonderful talent in capturing the characters and a coherent choice in your words...really looking forward to more, espech. Gordon and Barbara - you're introduction to them here was *perfect* - can't wait to see where you're gonna take this, well done on a wonderful start!

He'll be alright. Poor Barbara.

Nice.

What will Selina look like? What do you have in mind?

Oh, goody! Catwoman and Batman will finally meet, right? Will Supes, Jason, and Lois be in this story as well?

Ei! Catwoman! Finally! MOAR plz! *is huge Catwoman fan*

Is the timeline supposed to be after The Dark Knight or Batman Begins?

I cannot WAIT to see where you go with this!