Lovin' it! Keep on writing! Rock on!

Write more! I love iggy

I love this XD I wish the story were told from Iggy's point of view, even if only for a chapter. We should petition for James Patterson to write a book all about Iggy XD

This is amazing XD Fave from me.

Both Bleach and fullmetal alchemist are aawwesome! ;)

ahahahah...you make Iggy so funny and awsome and hot! but mostly funny! I think that you really stick to charecter well! James Patterson should totally include more Iggy in his stories!

No faxness! no more of that! Faxness is so old! more Iggy! He is the coolest and really doesn't get enough ced in the books.

good job!

you need to write more like this!

i think it would be GREAT if you had another chapter where the flock got "hypnotized" except for Fang (maybe he wasn't looking, or something)

Fang, of course, would knockout bad guy, but then he has a "hypnotized" flock on his hands

he could do a bunch of really devious things to everyone

i mean, you could think of a LOT of mischief for him to pull while they are hypnotized

(just suggestions)

*tell Max to kiss him

*make everyone say dumb things

*videotape them hypnotized and put it on his blog

*tell Iggy to make him an omelete, snappy

*make them his servants

you could go on for awhile until Fang gets bored or decides he wants them BACK duh duh duh

todles!

Funny! Was the supergeek gonna sell them on ebay?

Very impressive!It takes talent to portray Iggy in his blindness. You did a good job! My criticism is that at times it was a little hard to understand and follow. And also your humor was great but I do think you used a little to much. If you use humor to much it's not as funny as before. I'm subscribing to your story if you ever write more. :D