Really good. It would be good if it were based on the cartoon rather then the film, but that's just personal preference.
As a piece based on the film, it did it justice and is written very well and your representation of Aeon is loyal to the film, and alot is like the cartoon too. The ending wouldn't have suited the cartoon, but I can see it next to the film. Thumbs up.

This is great! Very well written. I know it's been awhile but it'd be great if you could continue this.