*sigh*
lovely, lovely, lovely...
I very much enjoyed your version of Bert, and how he struggles... And keyed in beautifully with the song..
Great story!
xx

Hooray!! I can read it now!! And it's veryvery good!! -helps self to ice cream-. M, yummy.

Okay, reviewing now. -eating mt. dew float-
Bert is very well done. I might have been thinking of this a weensy bit when I wrote Sweeper's Luck. I love that he's just totally given up on everything (not that that's a good thing..) and then -gasp- Mary is back. And he still doesn't say the L word. Instead, he just says 'come on in'. So cute...

And Mary is veryvery good. Mucho love there. And I like the song too. Going to have to look it up now...

you should really make this into a real story it would make a little more sence

The song, with its homelike kettle metaphor, really fits with Bert's caring, nurturing character and the whole situation. Also, he bit with the torn-up letter was really sweet... New Mission: Make Bert happy!
But it's "enthusiasm", not "enfuzeiasm", and you might want to skip a line between the song lyrics and the text.
Otherwise it's a nice story for an adorable pairing.

Well this is the first Mary Poppins fic I've read, though I did watch the movie several times. But aw, that was sweet. I always thought they had chemistry. ;)

Have a good day, and God bless.

Metropolis Kid.

A great poem fic. Very good.