 KCS 2009-04-21 . chapter 6*cackles* That last line is so unutterably priceless. |
 KCS 2009-04-21 . chapter 5Ick, allergic reactions are horrible. Poor Holmes! He really must have been miserable, to go see another doctor. |
 KCS 2009-04-21 . chapter 4Aww. ^^ I love how even depressed himself Watson can still make his friend feel better too. |
 FoggyKnight 2009-04-21 . chapter 5Wow, looks like a serious case of poison ivy. If only it wasn't from inside the house. Wonder what it could have been? |
 Osa 2009-04-21 . chapter 3This has got to be the beginning of a longer story! |
 bcbdrums 2009-04-21 . chapter 6aw XD this is cute and funny...
little sherlock...musical, observant, attentive, logical...
and mycroft. hungry and irrtating XD
it's great :)
and yeah, i've read it before XD |
 bcbdrums 2009-04-21 . chapter 5aw...this brings up...interesting memories.
nice work with the dialogue...
...i love a happy ending XD |
 bcbdrums 2009-04-20 . chapter 4when did you write this? you've never showed it to me...
and...i love it. it's excellent. IC, well written... :) |
 Tristan-the-Dreamer 2009-04-18 . chapter 2Um...yeah...that was like...someone...reading my mind...that was...strange. but brilliant. And amazing. And stupendous. And shockingly good. And outrageously fantastic. And you've just inspired me to keep on writing. And it was awesome how you didn't make things blunt at the end, just the right amount of explanation. |
 AmatorLinguae 2009-03-11 . chapter 3Wow! Oddly enough I'd been considering a scene rather like that, though fortunately I've since changed it a bit. :) Very well handled, and I like the little details you threw in, like the *curried* mutton and Holmes sitting where he could see everyone.
Oh - and I loved the little bits of humor at the beginning; poor Watson's always being got after for his little habit. :) |
 Westron Wynde 2009-03-11 . chapter 3Oh my, two assassination attempts in one day - that's not good news.
Can we hope that there might be a sequel to this? I'm dying to find out who was responsible and why!
Great work! :) |
 aragonite 2009-03-11 . chapter 3 AGH! |
 Cat 2009-03-11 . chapter 3 It's a good scene...I'd like to see the entire fic--I hope you plan to write it :) |
 bcbdrums 2009-03-10 . chapter 3ooh, brilliant! this like.../defines/ IC...i don't know how you get so perfectly inside holmes's head, and communicate his thoughts, but you do. and watson as well...you show that side of him that few people address...*tries to put it to words* it's like...like...*thinks*...hm. i don't know. but you have a unique way of writing him, that is still very IC and enjoyable to read :)
...think you'll write a little sequel? XD let us know how the case comes out? |
 KCS 2009-03-10 . chapter 3MEEP!
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You do know that we won't let you off the hook until we get the rest of the story, right?
*smallmeep* |