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Reviews for: Unfinished Business
XLVIII
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
yup that is what i needed to finish my day, i love it really, for a moment back there i spilled a tear or two... yeah today im a little emotional so what X) anyway great fic i hope a second chapter is on its way XD!! i missed edgy soo much in apollo justice, i really wanted him to come back and kick young apollo **... and phoenix ought to do the same to the klavier guy but well we shal wait and see what happens
Ptoras
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
That... was sudden. I suggest you make the transition a little... slower? (Okay, a lot slower.) But that was cute. And good writing, too!
PandaLuv
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
...HOLY CRAP! brillaint, almost made me cry with saddness and joy. I'm glad they gots together cause that was as sweet as pie! :3 definitely favoriting
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