 howlsatthemoon 4/19/09 . chapter 1The dialogue and plot was funny, but you've really gotta work on the grammar, spelling, and the punctuation. And Blair was a bit OOC. But other than that, I think you could be a really good writer.
Oh, and I doubt Chuck's slept with ONLY them. He's probably done half the Upper East Side by now. ;] Lol. |
 xoxoCBxoxo 4/6/09 . chapter 1ha! that was funny! u should do more stuff like it!
xoxo
andrea |
 ChuckBass 1/1/09 . chapter 1Hehe this was funny,I was laughing you did a pretty good job keep up the good work. |
 princetongirl 12/31/08 . chapter 1loved it update soon |
 Literista 12/31/08 . chapter 1Your Nelly is really funny and the fact that Chuck slept with Dorota is hysterical. However, there were way too many spelling and grammar mistakes in this fic for it to be good. And your Blair characterization was a little off. Keep working at it, though. You might have something here of the humor variety. |
 dazzledeyes 12/31/08 . chapter 1Not very well written and totally OOC, but REALLY funny. Pretty good job. You made me laugh, at least. :) |
 ExclamationDot 12/31/08 . chapter 1Chuck Bass womanizer I like it its true
the girls words made me laugh
Mainly nellys this todd boy Ha. |
 oceanation93 12/31/08 . chapter 1Haha that was funny, but dorota needs to have an accent
and be grammatically incorrect all the time! |