Fantastic job. I really enjoyed your dialogue. However I was a bit disappointed at how sudden the ending was. I would love to see a followup story.

=D yay crossoverness! i likes it!

Muggles deserve death?
That's not very nice of Barty, now, is it?
Of course, torturing Neville's parents wasn't nice either.
-Resists urge to brutally murder BCjr)

That's awesomeness.
RosexBarty...
that would be an interesting one.
-Rose (and the Doctor... or is it Barty?)