For the next chapter you should have Naru-Naru and Kiri FINALLY kiss! Great story so far! Update soon please!

Thanks soo much for updating! I think that on the date, Narumi should show more of his sweet side. And kiss Kiri...w/o fainting please :D

Very sweet. Please update!

very nice!tell... iori next?

Aw! THIS IS AWESOME! But you need to know where to finish a sentence. ^^'' Besides that, This is the best Beauty Pop Fan Fiction I have ever read! X3

He fainted!? XDXDXDXD
I actually laughed, I think that's the frist I've laughed OUT LOUD to a fanfiction...

Were you trying to be funny, 'cause god almgihty you made my chuckle XD

And also, it's about time you updated :D

UPDATE SOON! <3
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he fainted! hahahaha! go Michiko!

love your story! and i hope you get your computer fixed soon, i can't go without a computer that long.

i dont mind the wait it was worth it.

Oohh... the issue has been resolved!

The idea was really interesting, but you need to fix some of your grammar and spelling mistakes.

like: "Brake" you should spell it "Break"
and a few sentences were awkward and needed punctuation in certain places.

eg:
I would not be in shock if there was somebody else in my bed but did it have to be puffy head.
Could be":
I wouldn't be in shock if anyone but 'her' was sleeping in my bed- but lucky me it was.
(I changed it so it wasn't so awkward. ^ ^;; but the sentence could be changed differently, from mine.)

Otherwise, I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. XD

JTD

it was awsome you have got to keep writing. please. i loved it!

omg i just finished the manga last night and wow i was going to make a ff like this but diff lol thnx for writing it, but there were spelling errors... if u want i can spell check them for you :)

updates son

oohh.. naru-naru's mom is soo bad...
:P heh heh...
keep going plz!

Nice. I was looking for a fanfic like this.
But you could have added in some commas though. Without it, it makes it kind of hard to read with the run-ons and all. (Man! I sound like a teacher. Haha!)
But other that...it's all good. :)

Update soon plz! XP