It was beautiful *tear* I sobbed the whole way through xD; The last paragraph was a little off (not sure how, exactly, but it was), but you wrote Lavi excellently! Wonderful job.

I'm french. I'm not very good in english but i read your story because i'm curious for this pairing. I understand and i love it. Beautiful tender and angst moment before the death of Lavi. Thanks.

That was...wonderful. I cannot tell you how much happier I've been with how many more people are writing Miranda fics. She's such a cool character, but totally underappreciated. And I really thing you got her down too. Lavi was pretty good too. You write them both quite well, I hope you continue to do so~!

i was sobbing in tears T__T
then choked when i saw your ending notes.
lols -_-
roars ~ >< thanks for such a touching story

That was sad... *sniff* But you wrote Miranda perfectly (that one 'clumsy' bit? Perfect! It didn't even ruin the mood.). Lavi was okay, too - especially considering his circumstances in your story, it worked well. Yep, I think you did a lovely job. Intense, but sweet!