This was really well done. Very in character and not over the top at all, I would have believed it had it happened on the show.

I really loved it, and I'm going to imagine that's how they really spent their Christmas. ;)

I love Eli & Maggie together, and I'd like to see them end up married (or at least dating). I didn't know David Duchovny was in Working Girl. Good for you, Eli.

BTW "alright" is not a word. "Already" is, but "alright" is not.

I love Eli and Maggie and this story's are heaven for me :D
specially since we don't know what's going to happen now that
the series was cancelled...:(... Anyways i really loved ur story i hope u write more... Thank u

That was nice - a lighter fic that still touched on the (obvious) tension between Eli and Maggie. With Eli's new serial-dating tactic and Maggie pretending that she never said anything significant... well, a bit of this holiday cheer is well-deserved!

Thanks for sharing! Hope to see more soon :)
- Jess

Great Job! There aren't enough Eli/Maggie fics. I admit I'm lazy so I haven't updated.

Yours,

Alex

more! especially since the "last" episode was so depressing, horrible even. you are so good at writing the characters yu should write a real ending for this show!