hey! dont discontiue a good story! the plot is nothing like game (except for conan's wierd behavior when leaving ran, which is only like game because it is a little sinister) continue the story i want to know what happens next. (love the plot,kudo comeing to live with kid is a good idea.)

Aw, that's a shame. I haven't read Game(?) but maybe I will now.

I didn't think this chapter was bad. Dialogue is quite appreciated at times, especially when it forwards the plot line. So how will things go with Shinichi living with Kaito? I can almost feel the tension in the room. Hopefully if won't explode too badly.

Shadow

YAY! SHINICHI! Please update, I really want to know what happens next!

really interesting story
please update soon

Wow nice and interesting story... I do admit that I'm still a bit confused, but I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!

Lili

next chappie please XD

nya >

This chapter is very terrific, thank you for this update and continue !

Ah, Kaito's being completely straightforward and blowing his cover. Pretty interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter with the confrontation!
Muse's depressed, eh? Try getting hold of some DC songs, or any song that you think matches this fic, than keep replaying it while you write. Works for me XD
Update soon!

You changing your name was the first thing I noticed. XD I was actually racking my brain for whomever Return is when I saw the alert in my mailbox.

Interesting. Shinichi and Kaito sharing a room? XD I wonder who drives who nuts first. What exactly is Shinichi up to, I wonder?

"the Lovely Aoko"? That sounds like something Hakuba would say... only 'cause he's a chivalrous idiot. *confusion ensues*...

*blinks*
...Kaito can behave in class?
I thought that Kaito could only be connected to 'behave in class' if the word 'can't' was placed in front of it...

Waiting to see more, this is good!

Oh. This is one of the first Detective Conan fanfictions that actually look interesting to me. Please update soon!

O, interesting story! Helps that it's written so well too! I can't wait to see Conan's action next, update soon!