Whoa an update... nearly a year and a half later! I think that's a record, Burned. P
As you noticed, I changed my penname. I'm still Vie though. Deep down. . I don't write much DBZ anymore (read: never) but still read it sometimes. And of course, WAM was always a fave of mine.
But anyways, it has been a long time. I miss the Weird Club... and everyone in it. Haven't talked to anyone it ages. What ever happened to Blu? I haven't seen her in so long... where did she go?
And what? No encore? Shaw... NO FAIR, Burned! XD But I loved the Shad and P fairies. And that strangely familiar queen...
Anyway, I'll try to keep in touch. Does everyone still have ICQ? I never downloaded it again after my hard drive crashed... but maybe I should. .
So here I am, checking to see if you're online when I get your message.
Crank up some AFI, get a refresher from the last chapter, and start in.
...Only to find a certain orange fairy. -_- ;; *whips out b-bat* Thanks, really. And then, there we are talking about a certain Queen, and I was like "SURELY it isn't Burned..."
Yeah, no.
*shakes head* For everyone's info, those were rather accurate portrayals, aside from Burned being so wise. *bfg*
Seriously, though, I'm enjoying it. I didn't really care for the fantasy spin too much at first, but it's growing on me, and it doesn't hurt to be in medias res, as they would say.
So now, what you've been waiting for; GIVE ME ANOTHER UPDATE! You OWE us all! You've been neglecting all your fics unduely. We'll be waiting! ...And some of us have bats.
I was only able to skim; for some reason I can't focus on my...there's a big lump. Just wanted you to know that I was making an effort to get on the jolly train and catch up reviews.
I'll include this review with the next chapter's. What I was able to get was nice. Quite interesting turn. I like it...I think.
Heh, I totally missed the update... but I'm reviewing now. .
A wood fairy! XD
Good portrayal of me. Little mischievous, naughty Vie. You know me too well, Burned. P I just hope that Bluey and Vie get an encore performance. *winkwinknudgenudge*
Hmmm, what is Mik in for? Evil does not sound very good...
*chibis walk out, holding a large white net and hold it taught in the middle of the room*
Pareathe: *walks out and blinks* Uh...what's that for, boys?
C. Goten: Vegeta-san suggested it.
C. Trunks: Yeah, he said we better take this out here, just in case.
Pareathe: *raises an eyebrow* In case of what?
C. Goten: *Son smile* He figures when Burned realizes you actually DID read the updates, she'd probably faint...
C. Trunks: ...so this is so we can catch her when she passes out from the shock.
Pareathe: *scowls* Smarta...lec...
C. Trunks: Yeah, I'll bet that's what you were gonna say. *smirks*
C. Goten: *glances at Trunks* She was? I though she was gonna say he was a smartass?
Pareathe: *gasps* Chibi!
C. Goten: *blinks* Nani? He is a smarta-
*Pareathe jumps up and clamps Goten's mouth shut*
Pareathe: *blushes brightly* (under breath)I'm gonna kill those men, corrupting my sweet chibi... *clears throat* Anyway, onto the review. Okay, that Ramon needs one of Gohan's fancy ki waves sent straight up his...
*Chibis grin expectantly*
Pareathe: ...windpipe.
C. Trunks: Man, you're no fun, P.
Pareathe: Get out of here so I can do my review.
C. Goten: But Pareathe-san, we wanna-
Pareathe: *smiles* Find out where your 'tousan's secret junk food stash is?
Chibis: O,O *huddle and whisper back and forth for a minute*
(Inside the huddle)
T: C'mon chibi, this is a bad idea, and you know it!
G: But-
T: Do you know what your dad would do if he found out we swiped his stuff?
G: But-
T: Quit thinking with your stomach, Goten! She's trying to get us in trouble so we'll get our butts kicked!
G: BUT-
T: WHAT? Gimme one good reason why we should risk doing the only other thing besides blowing up the planet that will piss Goku-san off?
G: *grins and whispers in Trunks' ear*
T: O,O We're there!
*Chibis unhuddle*
C. Trunks: After much deliberation, we've decided to accept your offer, Pareathe-san.
Pareathe: *blinks* Pareathe-*san*? *narrows eyes on Goten* What did you tell him?
C. Goten: *nervous laugh* Nothing Pareathe-san... *fidgets*
Pareathe: Spill it.
C. Goten: *shakes head furiously*
Pareathe: SPILL IT, CHIBI!
C. Goten: *sulks* I told him about 'tousan's special suckers.
Pareathe: *blinks* Special suckers? What are you- *mouth falls open* How do you know about those?
C. Trunks: Too late, P. You wanna make this deal, or can we go ahead and get comfy in this review box?
Pareathe: Hn, joke's on you, boys. Goku hasn't had any of that tequila candy in a long time.
C. Goten: Cause it does funny things to him, and you'll kill him if you find out he snuck in a whole box of 'em?
Pareathe: He WHAT?
C. Trunks: *sweatdrops* Uh...we'll get back to you on telling us where it is... *grabs Goten by the collar* We gotta meet my dad in the GR...you know how he gets if we're late...bye! *zooms off*
Pareathe: *glares* I'm gonna get that imp... And I don't mean Trunks or Goten! *growls*
Anyway, definitely worth getting off my butt to read, that's for sure! It's getting so tense...so angsty...so very cool! I'm really looking forward to more! And I'll try to be better about reading on time...
Goku: *peeks in* I'd be happy to spank her if she gets slack again? *grins*
Pareathe: *eyes narrow* Sure...but you better make sure I have a piece of CANDY to chew on...to help with the PAIN...
Goku: *gulps and whispers* Oh shit, she knows... *runs*
Pareathe: KISAMA, GET BACK HERE! *waves* Gotta chase...erm...run, but I'll be looking for more soon. :) Ja ne!
Hmm ... I dunno about the little contest thingies, 'cause i'm lazy, but the story itself is awesome. WRITE MORE!
I like the whole waking-up-with-wounds idea ... i think I used it once before in one of MY stories that i haven't typed up yet .. maybe I should dig it out and type it up ... There's a thought! See! NOW look what you've done! You've gone and made me think! ARRRRRRRRRGH!
Um, is that song by Enigma? And if thats the song i'm thinking of, i LUV that song. okay... i think i SHOULD know what that quote it from... ack! ::pause for thought:: I want to say 'Beauty and the Beast' cause thats what i'm thinking, but i know thats wrong... you'll tell us on the next update, right?
Hey, all right! You've finally updated this story! And outside of a couple of typos in this chapter(such as "betroved" should be "betrothed), it's as good as ever! What a twist in the story in you have there. But please let Gohan find her soon! *pleads with puppy eyes*.
Vie: As if I wasn't addicted enough! Now you have to go and make the story even more addicting?
WTV: Onna, you have a problem.
Vie: Like I haven't heard that before. Anyways... haha!
Contest #2:
"The Last Unicorn". And Prince Lir was the one who spoke those words. P
Vie: Hehe, and I haven't even read/seen that book/movie. .;; The joys of the internet.
Ed: That's cheating.
Vie: Is not! Burned didn't say I had to have read/seen the book/movie. Just had to tell her where it was from.
WTV: The onna has a point.
Vie: *sticks out tongue* So, guest appearance, huh? .
WTV: Please, like the onna needs any more inflation in her already oversized head.
Vie: *twitch* Remind me again why I keep you around.
Ed: He makes a good coat rack.
Vie: That he does.
WTV: *scowl*
Well thank you so much for update, Burned. Now I have to wait in suspense for another six months. T.T But fear not, for Vie has a little something up her sleeve. Maybe I might have a story on my hands. *grin* But we'll just have to see, won't we? Hehe...
As for contest #1, you probably won't believe me, but I seriously knew it by the second word. The winner is...
"Return to Innocence" by Enigma
Ai yi, ai-aiiiiii-o-i-yi
*Ahem*
Moving on, as for contest #2...
Blu: Darn it! You KNOW I know this! I have the video, even! This stinks!
Schmendrick: Well, that's a very nice sentiment, but-
Blu: I said it STINKS!
I don't know how I feel about a "guest appearance" though...that could be scary. Maybe you could just bow down and prostrate yourself before my gloriousness? No?
Anywho, this was another in a series of great chapters, and man! Who would ever have thought this little ficcie would have come down such a twisty road, huh? Great work, as always, and...where's the next chapter?
I SAID, WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?
Schmendrick: And be wary of wousing a vizard's...er...rousing a rizard's...be wary of Blu.
Blu: Damn skippy.
Fred: I'm scared. Can we go home now? *looks around schizophrenically for Gohan*
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