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cwtch 12/7/11 . chapter 1
This is beautiful! I like the whole first meeting and imaginary friend bit. This really made me think. Hmmm, so is fuji real? Anyway, great story!
disfigured-dream 5/24/09 . chapter 1
Haha.. I'm not going to be very constructive here, and just say 'beautiful'.

:))

Well written, as usual.
Requisite 3/1/09 . chapter 1
What a unique way of looking at this.

This was very endearing, very sweet, but very sad at the same time. I think the contrast between having a friend - an only friend - and acknowledging the fact that they're not physically real is a great way to depict many things, and the fact that you wrote this makes me almost happy, in a melancholy sort of way. Lovely character depiction; you have a good grasp on Ryoma, I think.

To me, there's this feeling of... I don't know... unease? While I was reading, I thought nothing of it, but when I reached the last line, it hit me. It felt like I was reading from a first-person point of view - I don't think I've ever read anything that felt quite like that. You have an admirable writing style.

Thanks for the read, I really enjoyed it.

- Gin for Tonic
kuraberri 1/3/09 . chapter 1
FINNY-CHAN-SENPAI YOU CAN ACTUALLY WRITE AUTISM I LOVE YOU NOW.

I can never do that. XD stories of my characters who suffer from something are always snatched away by the NGs. DX

I love it. XD whee!

Kura
mysteriously.mesmerized 1/1/09 . chapter 1
It was lovely, Melo-nee-chan-sama! :3 Although I was a bit confused at the beginning, but it was cleared up; the ending was so sweet! X3

"Remember me," His voice is playfully soft in Ryoma's ear. He kneels before him, hands placed affectionately on Ryoma's shoulders, "Ryo-ma-chan?"

"I'm not dumb, Syu-su-ke."

XD That was just simply cute! *squees* Don't put yourself down over this, it was really well written; definitely a lovely gift for Christmas! X33 *huggles!*

Happy New Year! :D

Crissy
reckless-rage 1/1/09 . chapter 1
_ May I say I am getting more and more jealous, the more I read of the Secret Santa fics? It seems like everyone (with the exception of yours truly who just spelled 'with' as 'iwth') is writing out such lovely fics, I just feel so inspired to write and write and write...:D (which might not be a good thing, but).

And no, I didn't know Ryoma suffered from autism, mainly because I simply don't know the signs at all, but I could tell he wasn't Ryoma himself, so that's good. XD And the bit where Rinko takes Ryoma out and everyone starts cooing over him - *squee* He's so cuute! *tackle glomps Ryoma* Ryo-ma-chan! Kya!

And then, and then, the last bit, "I'm not dumb, Syu-su-ke." Squee! I love the way that was written! Like the names were drawn out and all!

"Ryoma gives a lopsided half-smile - the very first smile in his life; shy, unconvincing, hardly a smile at all. But it doesn't matter." *tackle glomps you* I don't need to say what I'm feeling right now. XD

Thank you for writing! *huggles fic and Melo*
PheonixShadow 1/1/09 . chapter 1
I love this! It's so, full of feelings. :) Lovely connection they have.
hyperdude 12/31/08 . chapter 1
That's really interesting, but I'm a little confused. Have Syuusuke and Ryoma met only once?

Other than that, I really liked the atmosphere you created, it matched really well with the story, and I'm a sucker for anything that's relating to art so, this hit one of my happy spots.
The Night Owl is Addicted 12/31/08 . chapter 1
I still think it's lovely. Even better now that I've read the whole thing. *huggles* I can't even explain how much I like this. It's just so pretty o
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