I just have to say: I love this.

An excellent poem.

If you mean that you wanted line-breaks instead of paragraph breaks (that is, no spaces between the lines), export the poem into your Document Manager, if it isn't there already. Delete the paragraph breaks and replace them with line-breaks, which you generate using Shift + Enter. Save and check that it's worked OK.

The go back to the story, and to the chapters page, go to the bottom and replace the existing version with the one that's in the Document Manager, that you just edited.

Very nice

Seriously. You write brilliant short pieces. Good job, as usual. : D

Though, I don't know about the mysterious line breaks. Apologies.

my interpertation of that was sad... really sad... but wonderful... aw...

that was really great. I liked it a lot =D

JL &Hearts