That was awesomely hilarious! Who doesn't love making Edward fell awkward?

hee...hee...hee...this was very cute! Gotta love those Denali girls! Poor Edward...

Okay. Not fair.

You didn't tell me you wrote a sequel Fair Game/Overnighter! And what a nice story this one was! So, now you've forced me to subscribe to you as an author.

I'm watching you!

Anyway, as you know, I do so love Kate, and your treatment of her here, as is your treatment of her everywhere, was respectful and delightful. I especially like how you cast this story in Edward's voice, although I would have had liked to have had a blow-by-blow of Emmett's thoughts ... but that's not quite a oneshot. "Wow!" repeated 50 times could get repetitive, I guess.

I guess Bella never discovered the gift from the Denali coven? Or, there's still 50 days left, maybe she stumbles on it during their last days of their engagement. Edward, out hunting, Bella, kidnapped at another "girl's slumber party" at the Cullens. Edward comes home to find Bella reading the book in his bed. "Edward, can we try this position?" *blush-blush-blush*

Blush, indeed!

geophf

That was great!

I love it, it's really funny but it also shows a sensitive side to Edward as well.

very cute...

That was surprisingly amusing. I love everything yo write, wchich I'm sure I've said before. But it's true, so I can say it as much as I need to.

Hahahaha, I loved it.

I loved that you included a little bit of Emmett. I can totally imagine him making fun of Edward when finding that book.

Great job!

Very cute, as always your stories are very entertaining. Hope you had a great New years. Love reading all your work you are AMAZING.;)

It took me a while to realize that Tanya and the sisters where the one's who'd annotated the book. But by the end it all fit together for me.

Poor Edward.

Aw, I adored this little exchange. i really enjoy reading from EDward's point of veiw, as you experience people's thoughts as well as everything else. Grand!

This is fantastic and I realy hope to read more from you in the future. Happy New Year! xx

Regards

Lemon

Aw, this was really cute. I will embarrassingly admit that I usually get all stomach-twisty and kinda pissy whenever the Denali coven women interact with Edward in fan fiction, but this was really sweet. Think I'm jealous much? ;-)

You know what's really sad and kinda just plain creepy? My sister has that book. Lol. Really good story. I liked that Kate didn't act like she was obsessively in love with Edward or something. You see that a lot. I liked it. Good work! twilighters-anonymous

Ah family... great story-perfectly captures Edward's character!

Thank you, thank you!

Bravo, superbly constructed, and precisely in canon.

That was really well handled, discreet while still a compelling read.

It could be a really interesting continuation if he finds a way to study his 'personalized' copy as Bella sleeps.

My highest commendations to the way you have absolutely nailed Edward's characterization and ensuing dialogue, it couldn't be more perfect!

P.S. I always thought that Edward's best resource for accomplishing this Herculean task would be the Denali sisters. Only his overwhelming objective of Bella's safety would force him to seek information (overcoming his own supreme mortification) in order to fulfill her wishes.