this is one of the best gta stories everybody should know about this story

Keep up the great work! The different writing styles and characters make a really interesting story beginning here! Keep it up! I'd love to read more chapters!

thats one hell of a good opening. you have a lot of talent

Seems laike a coolfic, has very good potential

great fic. I hope to read more of yours and the other guys that wrote it in the future.

I like this...I like all the fics produced. I wrote my story ages before i discovered fan fic and I have now seen loadsa ppl that write about GTA, like me!

the use of the Mafia and the Yakuza remind me of my fic...Gangster's Paridise. Ah well...continue with this...it has potential for a thrilling tale.

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I like the story alot, but the Summary is confusing. Other than that, good story