Gods this all fits so abhorrently well with the canon I want to hate it. I want to despise you for writing something that could easily be a back story to the film we all love. Why? Because it is not what I imagined and yet...and bloody yet, I love it, dearly and truly...it has sorted itself into my mind and shall never again be displaced.

Eternally,
Alexandraya

How does this story only have 7 reviews? You are just SO DAMN TALENTED. If I didn't love your writing so much, I'd have to hate you for being better than me. Your use of language and metaphor and the flow of your sentences is just breathtaking and beautiful. Keep it up...publish a book! The world needs more talented authors.

oh man, a sequel! Poor Linda, I hope she makes it out. and I like the waitress who seems to definitely be something more?... so many mysteries, I'll definitely look forward to seeing how it all plays out :]

Fantastic, as usual. What a unique mind you have, a wonderful way with words, and a fascinating plot. Please keep writing, you are one of the best authors I have read! (And that is saying a lot).

Wow this just keeps getting better and better

I wonder how it will all play out?

Keep up the good work!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon!

Oh, great description by the way. The way you described Hoggle's eyebrows was interesting

"bushy eyebrows like rain clouds over the plains" ... that was cool and I never would have thought of that

anyways, good luck with the next chapter

Thank you for sharing this interesting, and cool chapter today. Keep smiling. :-)

Aww how sweet.

I really liked that chapter

It made me warm and fuzzy inside.

I almost feel bad for Robert, but who could resist someone like Jareth? =]

This story is amazing and most original. I look forward to more

Update soon! ;)

Very good and most interesting

Keep it up! ;)

This has been an interesting chapter. Happy New Year. Keep smiling. :-)