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KageOkami-Kogo
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
I can't believe I didn't read this one lol excellent job!

(“I kinda wish I’d known that earlier...I’d have...y’know...” he trailed off, blushing madly.)

I died laughing... so funny! Great job as always!
vicious-kitsune
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
IT was really cute and I really enjoyed it. But I'm in two minds about dragon balls as gifts. In one way they're brilliant, like you said ultimate gift card. On the other hand it shows a lack of imagination from whoever's giving the gift. Having said that I would kinda love 2 wishes for a gift...I mean who wouldn't?
Jan Kun
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
Very, very short and sweet. Great writing!

I love the simplicity. You let the characters' emotions shine out without putting sophisticated wording. Bravo! Again, I say!
Mystical-Dreamer57
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
LOL! OMG! That was the best. I love how he went to all the trouble. So sweet. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait to read more of your work!
Ishy Carvajal
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
AWESOME! Anoher fantastic story! You are really good at writing Gohan/Videl fics. Has anyone ever told you that? If not, its a shame they haven't. Hope to see another one-shot soon! Keep on writing!
texaspeach
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Hehe, definitely short and sweet! How cute!
KickAssVidel
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Really cute story! I would sure love for a guy to give me the ultimate gift card! :) Short and sweet, just like u said. U know, ur a really good writer; maybe u should try to make an actual story with more than one chapter. I'd be really interested to read it. Of course, u don't have to do this. It's the thought that counts, right? Or maybe you can show your gratitude by actually accepting my idea?? lol
ShadowMajin
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Very short and sweet. About three seconds of it.

Nice entry. Always showing me up, aren't ya MaMa?
Alman626
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
ye that is sweet!
I cant belive im running late with my entry though! ARGH!
I blame photoshop! :S
sword2588
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
NICE! Gohan just got punked! Real Nice!
Piccolo is green
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
I love this story! It's really cute- short and sweet is good!
Lol...I left it too late to enter this month myself...the holiday season took over my life in the last few weeks! Kudos to you for getting an entry in during this busy time!
dbz-lover91
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Hey, love^^
This WAS short and sweet^^
It put a smile on my face. Well, when reading the part where Gohan remembers walking in on Videl during her home workout, it was more like a evil grin.^_~
Good luck with the SI contest^^
Oh, and belated Xmas and Happy New Year^^
I'm totally hoping that 09 is a blast for all of us^^
Love,
R
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