 KageOkami-Kogo 2009-02-04 . chapter 1I can't believe I didn't read this one lol excellent job!
(“I kinda wish I’d known that earlier...I’d have...y’know...” he trailed off, blushing madly.)
I died laughing... so funny! Great job as always! |
 vicious-kitsune 2009-01-16 . chapter 1IT was really cute and I really enjoyed it. But I'm in two minds about dragon balls as gifts. In one way they're brilliant, like you said ultimate gift card. On the other hand it shows a lack of imagination from whoever's giving the gift. Having said that I would kinda love 2 wishes for a gift...I mean who wouldn't? |
 Jan Kun 2009-01-15 . chapter 1Very, very short and sweet. Great writing!
I love the simplicity. You let the characters' emotions shine out without putting sophisticated wording. Bravo! Again, I say! |
 Mystical-Dreamer57 2009-01-08 . chapter 1LOL! OMG! That was the best. I love how he went to all the trouble. So sweet. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait to read more of your work! |
 Ishy Carvajal 2009-01-02 . chapter 1AWESOME! Anoher fantastic story! You are really good at writing Gohan/Videl fics. Has anyone ever told you that? If not, its a shame they haven't. Hope to see another one-shot soon! Keep on writing! |
 texaspeach 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Hehe, definitely short and sweet! How cute! |
 KickAssVidel 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Really cute story! I would sure love for a guy to give me the ultimate gift card! :) Short and sweet, just like u said. U know, ur a really good writer; maybe u should try to make an actual story with more than one chapter. I'd be really interested to read it. Of course, u don't have to do this. It's the thought that counts, right? Or maybe you can show your gratitude by actually accepting my idea?? lol |
 ShadowMajin 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Very short and sweet. About three seconds of it.
Nice entry. Always showing me up, aren't ya MaMa? |
 Alman626 2009-01-01 . chapter 1ye that is sweet!
I cant belive im running late with my entry though! ARGH!
I blame photoshop! :S |
 sword2588 2009-01-01 . chapter 1 NICE! Gohan just got punked! Real Nice! |
 Piccolo is green 2009-01-01 . chapter 1I love this story! It's really cute- short and sweet is good!
Lol...I left it too late to enter this month myself...the holiday season took over my life in the last few weeks! Kudos to you for getting an entry in during this busy time! |
 dbz-lover91 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Hey, love^^
This WAS short and sweet^^
It put a smile on my face. Well, when reading the part where Gohan remembers walking in on Videl during her home workout, it was more like a evil grin.^_~
Good luck with the SI contest^^
Oh, and belated Xmas and Happy New Year^^
I'm totally hoping that 09 is a blast for all of us^^
Love,
R |