bravo bravo more more more

this was just great.

more please

Very cool and I'll be looking forward to the sequel because i know that you're probably already working on one.

Nice chapter and I totally agree with the adding another bathroom. If for no other reason than the parents/couple can have a bathroom all to themselves and one for general use.

Great work!

Haven't heard the phrase 'butter side up' in a while. Nice to see someone still uses it. Do I really have to tell you, again, how much I like this? Or can I pretty much just say whatever I want to and you know that I like it? We to that point yet? Or shall I continue to stroke your fledgling writer's ego? later gator

Nice ending for the chapter. For a few minutes I was starting to worry that Jess was going to make that mistake. Keep up the good work.

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Good job.

Pam

Awesome chapter and nice cliffie. Looking forward to the next one.

Good job!

Ah, ya can't kill Jim. He's the comic relief when you need it. Keep it up.

This was a sweet chapter. Kinda felt bad for Cody being on the other side of the bag. Know what that can feel like.

Liked the twist with Julie. Glad to see another chapter up. Keep up the good work.

Wow, nice hook at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter to go up. Now Derek really would have a reason to stay because I just can't see that man giving up a child.

Awesome! I love the idea of Matt and Robin. I can't wait for more.

Glad to see the muse has hit you again. Loved this one and you got the banter down good. Quit worrying so much and just go with your heart. Looking forward to the next chapter.