Terra-byte made 2 mortal mistakes:

(1)His cruelty towards Jackie was too much for Buzz & Delete to put up with.

(2) He didn't destroy the over-ride disk after he wiped Motherboard's programming.

Nice to be able to review with just a codename.

OK, chptr.1 has repeated references to Hacker's final defeat, but no details were given.

whoop whoop itz gonna continue congratrs new couple 'perfect love'

haha cute

I just realised something while reading the chapters. I read this story once when I wasnt a fsnfic writer. ON TO THE SEQUELS!


-Arc ;)

Great, great, great, great, lol Doc and Shock.



GREAT!'

-Arc

hey i thought id let you know i liked this alot
i may have to come here sometime and make a fiction for some anime of my favorite type.
but all in all a good read
and i look forward to reading more of them

this was really good! I love how matt asked inez out using math, lol, great story, im sorry its over.

Great job that was an awesome story, can't wait to read the rest of the lost dimension, til then. PEACE XD

Great story and ending and nice pairings too.

Aw, is the story over? I really loved it. :) But everyone is happy and with Terra-byte gone, everyone can remain that way. :)

Great story over all. :) Looking forward to chapter 3 of the Lost Dimension.

LF02

I love the using-algebra-to-ask-Inez-out tactic Matt employed there. Very funny.

You should've done more little funny stuff with the other characters, would've not only made for a longer chapter, but also made it that much more fun to read.

I'm actually a tad surprised you didn't throw in a cliffhanger or some other kind of twist there at the end.

Oh well, looking forward to future writings. :)

love the end and as for terra byte he's a big ugly southern jerk who desreves what he gets!!

Great chapter. :)

Aww Jackie and Slider are so cute together. :)

Can't wait for chapter 10 to see how everyone is doing. :)

LF02

good chapter can't wait 4 chapter 10 til then. PEACE XD. don't worry chapter 3 should be up soon, ok til then PEACE XD again