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LostGryffindorFoundSlytherin
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
Yay! I sorry I didn't review the last chapter(s?) but yay!So happy.
Lizzy likes the hot guy
2009-11-21 . chapter 24
DUDE!
that was brilliant.. loved every second of it..

and now i am up to date!! YAY!!

NO MORE SCHOOL FOREVER!! [until University.. sh]

So now can you update more/faster XD
Lizzy likes the hot guy
2009-11-21 . chapter 23
Great chapter,

I really loved it, and from what you said about the changes, this sounds so much better.

But maybe Remus could join that section of the ministry, and try and change it from the inside?

next chapter here i come
Allen Pitt
2009-11-18 . chapter 24
That's very interesting, the idea that she might have to return, if the opportunity presented itself. She certainly has started to change things. It's weird to think of her back in Sunnydale, but with a wand and knowing how to make potions/charm objects/transfigure things, apparate (?) and so on. she'd be super-buffy.
One wonders if the same amount of time will have passed there, as 'here' ? Could always have her leave then come back in Harry's time...
Teleliniel
2009-11-18 . chapter 24
Stackars Buffy =( Men det är skönt att hon och Remus är sams igen =) Det verkar som att både Sirius och James har blivit vuxna =) Underbart kapitell! Janna
Mordanyes
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
This story is beautiful! I loved this chapter! You are such a great writer! I was full on frown when I read what Dumbledore will do or might do! Crazy old wizard he is!
Saphira7
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
I'm glad that you could update again. I liked the way that you made Dumbledore seem a little harsher in his speech to Buffy about how she had to go back. I hope that you can update again some time soon!
Gothic Paranormal Author
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
This made me unreasonably happy. Especially the end of the chapter. Remus is such a sweetie :)
Thenchick
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
I think dumbledore is wrong. If he lets her stay dont u think that lily and james might pick her to be secret keeper and because she would never give them up, they would survive?

I would love that.
Wandering Hitokiri
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
Okay, I really really do not want Buffy and Remus to get separated. That would equal bad things, and I'm kind of tired of both of them getting the short end of the stick. Those two deserve some happiness in their lives. Besides, the whole portal bit happened for a reason, right?

Therefore, Dumbledore should view what took place as a predestined act, meaning that it was MEANT to happen. If someting was supposed to take place, you can't just say 'oh, I don't think that this is right' and try to put it back. It's kind of like dropping a glass and then trying to Superglue the pieces back together in the hopes that your mom won't notice: it's obvious that something is wrong.
Helios93
2009-11-17 . chapter 24
I really hope that Dumbledore doesn't believe in what he said! If he does then he's a... *insert word* lol
I loved this chapter as always!! xD Can't wait to read the next one!!
Spygrrl
2009-11-10 . chapter 23
Love, love, love the wedding scenes! It is so nice to get possible backstory on Lily and James. Really well done.
Nicholas
2009-11-08 . chapter 23
What the hell!! This is the most ridiculous story! Where is the real slayer in all this? WTF. all this immaturaty and Sex at the same time!! We want dark and gritty, not sweet and kinda smuty!! Grow up!
kt187
2009-11-05 . chapter 23
Congrats to James. And a kick in the pants to Remus! Not the best way to handle the Buffy situation... But I do feel sorry for him in the job stakes, I really wanted to throttle the magical creature administrator - what an idiot! Till next time...
Mordanyes
2009-11-03 . chapter 23
This was GREAT! I love how you write! You are a great writer! Keep it up! You're doing great! I loved how James acted. He was so sweet
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