loved it! :)

this is seriously amazingly good!

That was cute!

So she does love Chris?

So do I!

What a great story!

Oh, a fleshed out version would be interesting.

Ugh, I love the beach at night. XD

You WILL make a fleshed out version of this. Come on, you know you're going to. In fact, I'm so confident that you will, that I'm going to put this on alert.

I really loved it, Becky. There needs to be more.

The Little Mermaid's one of my favorite Disney movies. And I think Jericho's probably seen it a fair few times also. OK, I don't want to imagine him singing "Part of Your World" because he probably would.

Great first chapter, Becky!

Tina

this is very well written, and so orginal. i love it :D

Do you know how long it's been since I have read a story where Jericho is a serious character? I can't even remember.

I BET IT IS HIS HAIRCUT!

The haircut that makes him look ten years older than he is.

Poor Gracie, having to choose between Randy and Chris. It's like choosing air or food.

Of course, she should choose Chris.

RANDY ALWAYS GETS THE GIRL.

I think you need to make this into a fleshed out story.

It's only natural.

Come on, you know you want to!

I'm going to put this on alert just in case.

CANADA

omg,that hair cut

ARIEL

AH id so pick christopher over randal

so adorable.