That was very well written, you did so well with the emotions, and I can definitely see this having happened in the show, and manga. Awesome job! ^_^

That was... indescribably amazing. Simply beautiful. You kept everyone in character - which is difficult to do in an angsty fic like this one! And I love your writing style: "and using every weapon in his arsenal to try and beat this man down... flinches, and looks away" makes it like a movie, or a One Piece episode with a quick little flashback before continuing the action - it's perfect! Thank you!