It's so sweet and sad at the same time. This it's perfect for Arystar.

HI!
Yeah, actually this one sounds pretty good! I had to read it twice to actually get the story because it sounded so good that I got caught in the sound and forgot about it saying anything at all hahaha
I go directly to the quotes, since it's easier to comment that way when it's a short thing like this ^O^

"since He chose her, out of the blue or rather the gray that was now a burning hospital white"
Colors again!

"Hevlaska once hated children."
This sounded so strange, I can't imagine Hev hating anything at all, let alone children, she's so motherly! hahaha But it makes sense when you explain it later. The sentence really stunned me, all alone there with such a content xD

"She was bitter because she hadn’t planned to become the one to save. She wanted to be saved."
I remembered Lenalee when I read this O.O

And my absolute favourite:
"It continued to grow until it enveloped her, growing from within until her human body was only a state of the mind."
I LOVED THIS! It's a very beautiful explanation of how her innocence developed, I liked it a lot!

I'm going to your other new story now!
Kss!

i think i can imagine hevlaska thinking all that in the earlier days as an exorcist. nice one! :D

Aw... I really hope we get to go into her past after Kanda's... Next one's X-Mas right?

Provided that we know nothing about Hevlaska's past, the fact that you're able to make something up is already quite amazing.
Now I want to know Hevlaska's past too...

So she was talking with... a cat? Poor Lulu, that cutie form she was given in the anime is not dign of a noah! hahahaha Though I pretty liked it, not like the doll-form of Road which is far worse than her usual lolita-look.
This was a piece on relativism, because after all who are bad people? those who do bad things? What if they act badly but the consequences are good? Are they still bad? That would be the next in the conversation!

I still love the way you use colors, Kuro-chan! It's amazing! The whole scene seems a picture ^O^
So my fav quote is this one:

"The leaves strayed from the tree and the ground had a carpet of yellow, brown and red. She ran a hand on the bricks of the wall we sat side-by-side, smooth childlike fingertips running along the irregular pricks of the rough surface."

Such a nice description!

Kss!

P.S.: BTW, are you going to write something about Yu and Alma? It's seems so romantic! I'm willing to try when my inspiration comes back from holidays! hahahaha

OMG the lastest chapter was so sad! =[ I nearly cried...

but anyway, this chapter was really nice too. =]

Can't wait untill next time! Are you doing a Thanksgiving one too?

It's a short one shot, but nice to read. The girl is rather creepy, but some kids are like that, I guess. I just updated my fic though, it's another creepy fic about Rhode.
Yeah, Lulu isn't a cat. But who cares? She's a shapeshifter anyway, so cat or panther doesn't matter to me.
We don't celebrate Halloween here, so I didn't dress up as anything.

WELCOME BACK!! =]

oh, and love this chappie.
I always wonder what the noahs are doing off-pannel, they're a really interesting bunch.

-receives all the confetti- Sankyu, Kuro-chan!! ^^ September 22nd...and autumn... -sigh- Man I sure love this season OwO I love the way the light changes and illuminates everything differently starting today... And also the leaves' browns and auburns, reds and yellows -insert iloveyouplz here- I wonder if it is only coz it is my b-dae XD Ma, I don't care! I just love it! Un!

Anyways, onto the real review:

I've always admired your work and you know it. I love the descriptions. I love simple ideas and simple concepts...but when they're written so amazingly, they make you feel you've read the most amazing work on earth...really ^^

Well done! ^^ Although I ain't no one to say whether it is a good work or not...^^; For me it is. Thanks for posting this ^^

lol awesome!

You updated! \(^o^)/

I think it's really rare for the Earl to invite the twins for any sort of tea party because they aren't very well behaved, but I guess it does happen, since they're family.

I miss the twins when they're crazy already...

Jasdero & Debito are so crazy! I love them. XD Can't wait until next month! Wow, it's almost been a year... Time flies... *Distant Gaze*

aww, I love Rabi (or however his name is spell), this fic is neat.