Hahahaha nice you put yourself in the fanfic! Cool!

hahaha great

XD best chapter EVAH!

Uh, Um, Eh, I dunno about this chapter. It seems ok but I would have left it at just a writer and not a story. It just seems to...I dunno odd. Overall well written and I do want to see how you finish this story.

I loved this chapter, 'twas completely hilarious! I loved the author's, 'I'll just skip the development, no one cares about that anyway.' XD You really have to wonder if that's what people are thinking sometimes. If you're worried about offending someone, you could just run the screen name through search to see if anyone's using it, or come up with something so obscure there's very little chance anyone's using it. Like, 'Tessfreeway' (The female version of a friend's universal username.)

Interesting, I can't wait to read more.

Nice concept! I'd like to see a bit more action to match the amount of dialogue, since this story is a bit exposition-heavy. For instance, writing the scene where Autor finds the pages, or describing Ahiru and Fakir's search in more detail.

Fakir and Ahiru's interaction is really sweet and suits them, and the story definitely has me curious. Please keep writing.

There's just something really awesome about these stories where the characters are being controlled in some way by some omniscient being... And then realize that they're being controlled. Whether it ends as a comedy or a tragedy, it's always interesting.

Probably the biggest reason I fell in love with this series in the first place. Anyway, PLEASE do carry on. I've rather enjoyed this story so far... Very much, in fact.

Interesting and intriguing story you got there~! I'll be looking forward to your next update!

nice! write! write! lol :D

Oh neat. Good. Great. Yep excellent three chapters.

This is such a great and detailed story. And Fakir isn't the one who turned her back into a human, that's very different, I like it.
Um, my three guesses are, Autor, Mytho (I don't know why) and um a um new character? I don't know, but I'm really curious to find out who and how they turned her back into a human and what their motives were.
Please update soon

That was really good! plz keep writing! :)

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Can't wait to see what happens next!!
I especially like where you have it narrated and then Ahiru wakes up thinking she was having that dream again. The one that was narrated.
lol.
Please update when you can!