You really have a way with writing the action parts, which I think is the most difficult. Also, the Lance/Pietro bud moments are hilarious.

Thanks! I enjoyed it!

I love it :'D

Everything. The concept, the characters (obviously), the writing style and, of course, Lance & Kitty.

I'm so happy it has a happy ending:)
I love your style, always did, and especially the fact that you are still into Lancitty^^ I hope you won't stop writing this pairing, and hope you will complete that oneshot about Lance you mentioned a few chapters earlier:)

wow just wow this is a beautiful story i loved the way you used the quotes from the past and fitted them in this chapter ti beautiful pls continue to write such amazing stories
>Val<

awahh so sweet!
great story, it perfectly captures the relationship between lance and kitty, as well as entertaining interventions from pietro
amazingg :))

:D great chapter loved this one!

wow, really good! ^^

Keeps getting better!

awesome :)

Ha ha, that was so cool! I really like this story, it's so refreshing to actually see a Lancitty fic that isn't about them breaking up, or something like that, and isn't unbearably laced with stupid. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon-ish! ^_^

great story, you do a wonderful job of writing about action

keep up the good work :))

Woah! What a fantastic thrill ride that was! I loved every minute of it and thought the action had a nice pace throughout :)

And I do so love how you write the boys - Lance is such a perve haha.

Great job :D

Well that was a wild ride. Writing was error free and the action was amazing. Love Pietro's and Lance's wit in this chapter and also Lance refraining from lethal force when he could.

Ought to be interesting to see how Kitty and Lance go about their situation now that the mission is coming to a close.

Good work!

totally love it. update soon plz!!

e gasp cliffhanger!
update soon please
great chappie :)