That was... beautiful and painful and... I don't know the right words...

Very nice, I'd love to see another one.

Brillant and perfect. They are in character, and the ending thought about sacrifices was very poient.

I must say this was a...intersting One shot, i think you are the first person to pull this off, congradulations! (confettei and balloons fall from thin air, "Congradulations!" written on the blloons)