Ooh, oh yes, yes, yes, a sequel to this golden story! I've never called any story golden before, FEEL HONERED, heh, I'm tired, it's late but for the review let's see Megs killing people, it's a shame really, yeah he's one too talk too Quacky but hey he saved him from guilt. Mushy endings are good..FAVES. BEST SLASH STORY EVER. I adore Quackerjack, he's my latest obession, I get one every month or two.

Oh, yes I loved this fic, I'm staying up pass curfew just too read it XD, killing is wrong anyway, but hey whatever floats QJs boat, I adore that man, and MV is like Derek with memory issues, good origin of Mr.Banana Brain, just thought I say that.

ooh, ooh suspence, only to more chapters too go, another good chapter

I feel bad for Quackerjack, poor guy, lost a friend, tbat sucks, I love how he is in this fic, and Megs is so supportive, yes tell the TV to never air those commericals, lest you upset the clown, good fic

uhoh things look bad for Derrik, frowns, not good..Megs confusion is staring to annoy me, but he's still sweet to his friend, which is good, tv has a crush on me XD, heh heh he made tbe hat. So the insanity is a growing thing? Cool. Good chapter

Megs is so ic it's shocking his clulessness amuses me, like his past cameos, is that guy talking to a lightbulb? Like how Banana Brain, Quacky future holding names that start as insults, cool. I can't help feel smething bad happens to Derek or maybe they fight, he gets fired and ends owing the Whiffle Boy factory, now thatt would be a twist and I'm rambling. Another golden chapter

he would forget how to help anyway, best IC of Megs I've seen, poor QJ I had tears for him, I would hug him, hm, sighs, now I'm depressed, not as much as QJ of course, poor dude..anyway I really enjoyed this chapter, pure gold man

Aw, how sweet of Megs too say. Heh heh a disobiedent lightbulb, QJs past, very intersting, he seems the same, yet saner..Poor confused Megs can't even remember his name, cool he keeps DWS private that's nice of him. Good chapter

Hmm I had read the earlier chapters of this, but I guess I didn't review! Well, better late than never, right? ;)

I liked the ending you put on this, and how you set up the next story. Megavolt and Quackerjack are cute together, and I like the dynamic you write between them. I love stories that get into a villain's head like this and give you an idea of what makes them tick.

Looking forward to what you come up with next!

Excellent ending, and quite good job with Megs' flashback/narration.

The last lines were quite scary.

Keep the good writing.

Hi,

I am glad you added this last chapter to your fic and it makes for a much more well rounded read now. Also the tidbit about your next plot is intreguging. ( I won't SAY it here ) people can read the chapter to find out LOL
I AM looking forward to your next Idea

thanks for a nice read HUGS your friend Irual

that was the greatist Qj X Megs story i've ever have readed ! Keep it up ;)

Dude I love your writing! Everything you write about Quackerjack and Megavolt are brilliant and you always seem to capture their characters small defining moments. The plots you’ve made for both of them and their past really fit into their personal villainy. Memory loss for Megavolt and issues of Toy’s and insanity for Quackerjack. One thing I like about this story compared to Electrifying Memories is how more scatterbrained Megavolt is. This humor makes up for the sadness and drama. I still can’t believe Quackerjack threw this batter pack into the tub, and had no sympathy over ‘killing’ the light bulbs.
Also Chapter 6 “He’s gone insane!” cried out Elmo.” LOL

Actually, it seems that Megavolt had killed as well, but he just doesn't remember who or why; Darkwing said that he sent him to the electric chair twice, and that's something that only killers get.

Very good chapter, and excellent job with Megavolt and Quackerjack. Also, cool job showing how they interact with Darkwing; they don't really see him as an enemy but as a player on the opposite team.

Keep the good writing.

And the villain is born! Again, awesome job on building Quackerjack's background.

Megavolt and Darkwing working together was always funny in the cartoon.

Keep the good writing.