Wow. Loved it! I was wondering about these two, and you...answered all of my questions. You nailed the old English too. Great work, one of my favorites, definitely.

Absolutely fantastic. The dialogue (completely faithful to the characters), the imagery (stunning), and the characterizations. Excellent job.

Excellent... very well done... :)

Thank you so much for writing this. It's made my entire night to be able to read it.

--JaydeeFaire

I really like this story; the word choice is impeccable, the conventions are just about perfect- if anything was wrong, I didn't notice. What I like the most about it all, though, is how you've managed to make the two of them share a camaraderie of sorts, yet they still both have a bit of spite in their hearts for one another, usually in sarcasm. Wonderful job.