That was totally amazing!!
The way it as written, the format, didn't throw me off at all, in fact, i think it made it so much more intense! The way you told their story was perfect.
I think, even if i didn't love both Paris and Rory, together and apart, you would have made me love them with this story.
It's just perfect, you have them down and it all just flows.
I love it =)

i liked it

Aww, that is so cute, the tiny christmas tree killed me with cuteness overload! Thank you, even though it was painful it was also realistic at how she described that being a gilmore made her kind of run away from love. Thank you for putting this story up :)

absolutely brilliant premise; i was actually halfway through when i realized it was following a story, but still the concept is wonderful. the short sentences were quite artful and left out the tricky part of having to join so much information together with paragraphs and transitions.
i'm not even a huge gilmore girls fan and i still loved this.

that was awesome. really great work. In my mind they end up happily ever after with each other.

really good! and it was Paris´ POV, even better

Fantastic.

can I put this in my community for gilmore slash fics?

good story