Of course we are going to write a thingy with me and my daddy! That is if we ever remember...

I LOVED the ending!

It was perfect.

Keep writing,

Italy

a great story!

Happy New Year!

...OMG! I adored this story! All the characters were amazing and lovable. I adored that Near was a father! and you know, people should really put spoiler alerts on their reviews if they're telling anything about the ending... I already knew the ending of the story before I got that far. A bit depressing. Anyways, my one negative comment is that you had many typos and grammatical errors to get around. Other than that, it was amazing and I would have loved to read more.

Hi again... well, i just feel like i need to write this down, because it had been some time since i last read your fanfiction, and then suddenly when i look over the chapter and saw there was an epilogue... i read both the last chapter and the epilogue and they just feel like the end was forced to come, i mean it had seem that you had a lot more story to continue and... you end it. I don't know, maybe it was the feeling that i wanted to keep reading but anyway i will not say anything of this anymore.

Your stroy was brilliant, i think the plot was great and original, i dind't like the end but it keeps being a good story, a really good one. i just hope you will write some more because i love the way you write and explain things. Good luck then! Bye!

I love your story! i never used to like Near that much but he's so cute as a father! Great job!

erm, the ending was kinda depressing. I was hoping for a longer chase, but it's good, just could be better. can't wait for the epilogue _ Ev-chan

D: When Max died I was like, "NU!" Then I read the end... Ha :D Light loses AGAIN *Does happy victory dance*

You know, that was just a way to cut off i brilliant story.

I was reading and then i was like what the hell? I mean the story was brilliant, the plot magnificient and you do this? you just cut the story, well if this is the final then it was a lovely story, i don't know what else to say...

huh so the best death note with light coming back so far

I was gonna say, you weren't gonna just kill Max off.

GOOD, i am glad light got hi kicked. He deserved it. Wait wait for the next chapter.

Kinda sad u would only make it 12 chapters, if the next chapter is the epiloge. It could have gone on for awhile.

Can't wait for the next (and or final) update.

oh god, the suspense! keep writing! this is awesome! i really want to see how this'll turn out. XD ev-chan

Ha! So they teamed up, and sheep-boy is P-Oed cool.

Oh that was bullshit. Light can be such an ass.

Having to frame Max like that.

That's true though, how can Max kill Light if he's already dead?

But it was however like Light, to frame someone like that.

Now, they are going to try to find both Max and Aika (Leah).

I would assume that Near and the rest might think Leah is helping her by writing names.

...Oh wait a second, i though of something just now. It said that Max was avoiding home for months. What if Leah found the notebook during that time and wrote all the names.

She might since her mom was Misa and she might want to continue what Misa did.

It could have been perfect for her to want to frame Max, since Her father caught Light of being Kira, causing her Mom (Misa) to feel very lonely and want to kill herself later on.

This is getting very good. Update ASAP.

Great!, no... Excellent! chapter, you know i had the suspicion of Leahbeing Light's and Misa's daugther, anyway this just make the story even more entertainig (if that's possible XD).

You know, Max is an interesting character, and the way he thinks just make remember of the grat brains of death note i don't know how you can develop so real arguments.

Well keep the good work!

León