That was a nice, well written and pretty funny to read little story there. Good job.

That was... different, and not in the wrong way. This kind of story is instinct and it rox!

The only things I have against this story is
1. Bubbles cursed. I don't think Bubbles would ever be the type to curse, angry or not.
2. Bubbles DID spend time in a jailcell, in Powerpuff Bluff when three criminals dressed up as the Powerpuff Girls.

Other than that, it was a good story. The pacing was perfect, Boomer was in character (Which is hard to do for romances), it was funny but not necessarily goofy or dumb.

4.8/5
Jacky-The-Ripper.

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Aw

good story!!~~ ^ - ^