amazing prophecy.

yep, true. thalia's half-brother is Mr. D? if i was thalia i'd freak out real bad. anyways, this is a great book so far. sad, when thalia died. but awesome. i can't wait for the next chapter. and for the rest of the book obviously. thanks for writing this book/story/novel or whatever you want to call it.

-Lieutenant of Artemis

cool love the story. i think its the best one about Chiron. And the prophecy-omigosh it was the best i've heard! (well except from RR) its great. But heres a word of advice: when a character is talking, separate them into paragraphs like this:

Mr. D scowled at me and continued. "Chiron we don't have any child of the Big Three!"

I replied, "Except for you..."

and so on. That's an example. But otherwise one of the best writing i've heard/read.

-Lieutenant of Aetemis

I'm enjoying this story very much. Chiron is one of my favoirte characters, and it's so refereshing to hear a story from his point of view! More, please!

Irina

Please continue!

Whacha waiting for? Keeping writing! The story's awesome!

it was interesting, you should continue. Please do keep in mind that Chiron sent Grover out to bring Thalia, only Thalia because of the prophecy and then of course Grover wouldn't leave Annabeth and Luke.

MORE PLZ, I HUNGER FOR MORE This story is sheer brilliance in itself. Nice Work!

It's a really good story and I only found one mistake: George Washington was a son of Athena, it says so in LT. Great story, though!

Hey, did you also realize that Zeus is the youngest son of the titans? But he rules the Gods, isn't that weried? Anyway, really good story and keep writing about it!

I liked it. Really good story. Keep going!

Omg! Did you come up with that prophecy?

It was just...like...wow!

i mean it's just awesome some people do prophecies but they dont come out like your did! It could be in the last book! That would be cool!

P.S. I made your user name famous..JK..but thanks for the spell check!

This was good; however RR said that George Washington was a son of Athena rather than Zeus. That aside, nice work, though a few lines of the prophecy were a bit awkward to read.

Keep it up!

-Sheva Das

Very good! Keep on updating.

Just a tip though: You should start a new paragraph for the part when Chiron starts talking about his students, like Albert Einstein and so on.