| Reviews for That Which Descends Into Light |
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LtTanyaBoone 6/7/11 . chapter 1This was amazing. Powerful and written with so much insight on the complex character that is Olga. |
Demonsexual 5/23/11 . chapter 1This is very good, oh sorry for asking, would you mind reading my Night Watch Fanfic |
Mehovik 4/28/10 . chapter 1That's really good. Have you read the books by any chance? Very very nice work, and i love your play with words! And the ending! AWESOME! |
GlassSplinter 10/16/09 . chapter 1I like this. I like how you categorize the levels of gloom. |
the almost saint 9/19/09 . chapter 1 This was good. I like how the women all can feel instinctively that the gloom goes deeper. I like how you portray her when she's falling in love and pays for it, and later when she's not so sure about it. I like how, at the end, she puts her own experience to work and foretells what should happen to Svetlana. I don't like hoe choppy this was. It feels like it could have been fleshed out a litle, but I see how you went about it. Good Work! |