This was amazing. Powerful and written with so much insight on the complex character that is Olga.

This is very good, oh sorry for asking, would you mind reading my Night Watch Fanfic

That's really good.
Have you read the books by any chance?
Very very nice work, and i love your play with words!
And the ending!
AWESOME!

I like this. I like how you categorize the levels of gloom.

This was good. I like how the women all can feel instinctively that the gloom goes deeper. I like how you portray her when she's falling in love and pays for it, and later when she's not so sure about it. I like how, at the end, she puts her own experience to work and foretells what should happen to Svetlana. I don't like hoe choppy this was. It feels like it could have been fleshed out a litle, but I see how you went about it. Good Work!