I loved this. It was very him, and it seems like a very good picture of how a villain like Dr. Horrible would come to be in that universe.

I love this story. I think you captured his character perfectly.

Very cool. I enjoyed the jumbled timeline and the glimpses of pre-Dr.H Billy. Great job!

~Red

I quite enjoyed reading this. I really like the disjointed jumps from past to future to present and back; it reflects the confused mind of a character who doesn't really know who he is or what he's doing anyway. Very well done!

Cute.

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I love this. This works. This is just awesome. I'm semi-speechless from the awesome-ness, actually.

OH. So fabulous. I love the glimpses into Billy's past and future and how you space them. Just...brilliant. :)

I like how disjointed it is. It sounds like Dr. horrible narrating, with his tendency to get distracted into non-sequitors. But put the whole thing together, and you have something with a lot of emotion (and a lot of different ones too).

This is excellent!

I loved it! I love reading about Billy's origin and you did a wonderful job, love your style too!
I just caught one error in this sentence: "He mother laughs..." I'm pretty sure you meant "his".
Great story, instantly one of my favorites. Keep up the good work!

Aw. Some of this is sad but it's really well-written and cute in a way and funny, too. I think you did a great job with this. One or two spelling mistakes but that's okay; they show up in mine, too (annoying little buggers, aren't they?). I think you have a great Billy. Don't you just want to hug him?

I think I fell in love with this piece after reading Billy loves fighting losing battles. Fantastic work!