Most likely Spiderleg.

Definitely an interesting idea. I totally agree with your implication and AsterEris' rant about the whole Ashfur thing *sigh* Warriors just isn't what it used to be.

As for the content, I thought it was pretty good. The whole "masquerade" thing was interesting; a lot more insightful than the stuff you usually find around this fandom.

The way you approached this also worked well, working from the stand of Ashfur being a scapegoat instead of going back and doing it over.

My main suggestion for this would be the style of the narration. It's pretty solid and generic right now, probably your own writing style. Seeing as it's told by Spiderleg, it would be nice to give him a bit of his own style. I guess that's a lot to ask from a oneshot, though xD

Great work! :D

Blaire, I love you, this was so perfect!

Nice. ThunderClan does act like the perfect Clan, huh? Pfft.

I wasn't too sure that it was Spiderleg you were talking about. It almost sounded like Cloudtail for a moment. Eh, I wouldn't know. Nice drabble, though. XD

ThunderClan is a puppet Clan!

I don't know why I said that. XDD

Nice work, hope to see more

Natz

Phantom of the Opera. I can has cookies?

So I originally wasn't going to review, but then I thought ah, what the heck. It's one of the better drabbles/fanfics floating around fanfiction. So here I am, off of my lazy butt, typing away-and I think I should stop rambling now.

Anyways. Awesome fanfic. I can't even find the appropriate words to describe this.

Well, I wholly agree with what Spiderleg(because that must be who's narrating, right?) is saying, that ThunderClan is a group of cats that are always pretending-because they are, aren't they? Everyone thinks ThunderClan are so /perfect/(although they probably don't like it), yet they have their own share of problems-maybe even more than the others...shoot, I'm rambling again.

-tries to wrap up review without rambling-

So...once again, awesome drabble. Favorited. :3

Phantom of the Opera! 8D Loved it, Blues Nice concept, nice writing, nice drabble And awesome summary. xD I luurve that song.

I think it's Spiderleg. He is Daisy's mate after all and from the books, he maks it seem like he doesn't love her. But that is just my guess

-Blaze

Spiderleg! He is the mate of Daisy right? So yesh I think it was him. Him or Hawkfrost...hm...

Phantom of the Opera. Love that song!

THAT IS SO SPIDERLEG and I like your phantom of the opera theme.

Love the Masquerade theme (from Phantom of the Opera - do I get cookies now?) - I never thought about how many ThunderClan cats have their little secrets, but this is a great description of it. It's Spiderleg speaking, and I agree with the theory that he (or at least someone else) was the traitor, although of course the Erins will go with the obvious choice in Ashfur. Honestly, the books are becoming so predictable they're barely worth reading. The fact that Hollyleaf, Lionblaze and Jayfeather aren't Squirrelflight's kits is just sad, not to mention you could see it coming from a mile away. But enough ranting. Great one-shot, especially the last line. It almost makes me think Spiderleg has a personality somewhere inside his one-dimensional stu-self... :P

-Aster

Ah-mazing, Blueness!

This is very interesting. I think you could be talking about Spiderleg or Cloudtail. Could you read and review the story(my first) I just published? It is called: an unexpected ally. Please tell me what you think! Thanks.

Umm, I would say this is Tigerstar's POV, but then what was that about Daisy? But interesting the way you based this bit on Masquerade from Phantom of the Opera.