 Doom Squirrel 2009-11-07 . chapter 5This story is really great. It's a realistic look at what Sora's life after returning to the islands could be like. I feel sorry for his parents, but at the same time I empathize with his frustration.
The buildup for the romance is going nicely, too. Smooth and gradual, and easy to believe. (Riku! Stop being stupid! You don't have to cut yourself out of their life just because you think there's not a place for you!)
Looking forward to more! |
 Wehiner 2009-10-18 . chapter 5 UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story. I love that it takes place in cannon. All I want now is more of it! |
 FifthDayOfMay 2009-10-18 . chapter 5Dude! This is freaking awesome, I love it so go write more soon mkay? XD Eiku should just kidnapp the two of them so all three can get cozy, if ya know what i mean yo. XD |
 Apprentice 2009-10-18 . chapter 5 I know the answer to Sora's question!! Riku belongs right alongside them, maybe force feeding the two of them Paopu fruit. XD I love this story, write more soon, I wanna see the three of them together and happy. |
 Niccy_C 2009-09-14 . chapter 5 I'm here via Asuka, who reced it on her LJ.
I just want to say that I'm loving this story! It flows on from the end of the game perfectly, and you've got the characters spot on in my opinion.
Looking forward to an update ^__^ |
 Lady Andromeda Black 2009-08-14 . chapter 5Looking forward to seeing this story updated. |
 Adel Mortescryche 2009-08-10 . chapter 5Honestly one of the more beautiful and realistic KHII compliant stories I've read. I especially love the way you managed to stay true to everyone's character, the story, and yet managed to weave in so much *more* that had been unsaid before, like what happened to the islands after Sora and Riku left, the reactions that people had, the possibility of their friends and aquaintances becoming heartless, the confusion Sora feels with regard to Riku and Kairi, his attraction towards both even though he's unable to name it, and the overall feel of normal life with a backdrop of all the crazy things Sora had to face to get back to it.
Interestingly enough, this is also the first ever RikuSoraKairi story I'm reading. 0.o I've read enough of those three paired together in various couplings with each other, though, so I'm waiting to see how you handle putting them in a threesome. What I've seen so far in the story is really making me look forward to it.
Well, not much more I can say right now, and feel as though I've ranted enough. Eheh... sorry about that. At any rate, can't wait till the next update! |
 Khelc-sul Renai 2009-07-03 . chapter 5Poor Sora... Locked in the house like that would drive me NUTS!
Good luck with that question, Sora...
Well written! Great read! Keep it up! |
 Ghost Writer no. 3 2009-07-03 . chapter 5*Claps and all that good stuff* YES! I love it when this idea is dealt with and you do it nice with that last line. |
 AppleCoreCandyBox 2009-07-03 . chapter 5Oh, I just can't wait to see what happens next! I can't help but feel a sense of forboding in the air. I mean, it's all very good and I love the way you've written this story, but I'm somewhat nervous for what might happen. I want everything to turn out alright, but I can also see how so much could go wrong, you know?
Anyways, enough of my ramblings. Awesome story so far, loving it to the max, and I can't wait to see what you plan to do with it next!
-ACCB
P.S.: I love that you write long chapters. LOVE it. |
 sillymail 2009-07-03 . chapter 5This was a fantastic chapter. ^^ |
 natcat5 2009-07-02 . chapter 5this is a really good story, and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Tesumaru 2009-07-02 . chapter 5I can't wait till you update again! It's a great story so far!! :D I'm a little confused on the pairing though! ^^; Is it RikuxSora or SoraxKiari? |
 Violet Shadows 2009-07-02 . chapter 5Good story, I really liked the update even if every time Sora's plauged by indecision I can't help thinking, 'Obviously they should have a threesome!" |
 Agatsuma Ritsuka 2009-06-30 . chapter 4Yosh! This is the kinda of story I've been waiting for! |