 panther73110 2009-05-17 . chapter 3I just found your story and I love it and hope you update soon. |
 ari 2009-03-02 . chapter 3 do you watch Fringe, jj's newer show? it's got technology-sounding stuff like this. i love it. fringe, i mean. |
 Oracle92 2009-02-27 . chapter 3nice story...although I don't like so much Sloane I totally love Irina..it was good that you put her in the story...keep writing please... |
 inacent 2009-02-02 . chapter 2wow this series has taken a whole different turn, 'as one door closes another one opens'. You answered many questions at the end of "Volcano" and here you leave us with so many questions, that's what I love about your writing hehe. Also I'm so glad that you've now gotten Irina in the story. I loved her character in Alias (though it was hard for me to grasp that she was evil in the end lol)and you've captured her character very well; the complex line that she travels between being a mother to Sydney and the agent that she is was always fascinating to watch. I look forward to what you have in mind for the next chapter. |
 ana1234 2009-01-06 . chapter 1loved it please continue |