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Mimi
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
Okay, so when I finished reading it my first thought was "Nice!"
My second one was "No!" Is that really it? Come On! Please do reconsider adding to it some more... I though that you'll add some scenes from Noel's soccer game and was very dissapointed that you did not... Also, I would love to see more of their relationship and not just a hint. All in all, cool piece. Very easy-going and light. Good use of humor. Basically, very enjoyable. LOVED IT!! ^^
Oasis Blackmore
2009-03-16 . chapter 1
I'm a fan of slash, and I'm a fan of Life with Derek. Why I haven't really looked into Life with Derek slash, I couldn't say, but this time, I'm glad I did. However, I couldn't see this or any other Derek-likes-a-guy pairing in another situation, as that just seems . . . unrealistic.

This, on the other hand, was amazingly believable. You portrayed all the characters with flawless authenticity as well as kept up on the witty banter. I also loved how you brought in Dasey (which we couldn't live without) to somewhat explain Derek's motivation for "dating" Noel.

Overall, great fic, especially for your first slash.

~ Oasis
snappleducated
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
NOEL! I LOVE NOEL!

Yes, I am going to say something constructive. The entire review is not going to be devoted to fangirling. Probably.

But...NOEL!

In other news, sulking Derek continues to make my day, Noel is a cunning little twerp, Casey is brilliantly oblivious in a way that is so...lovable, and WHAT THE HELL WOMAN I AM A DASEY SHIPPER STOP CONVERTING ME.

It's people like you who are slowly making me an m-slasher. I would weep and mourn the loss of my purity were it not so--freaking awesome.

That applies to you, as well. Because you are freaking awesome. Even if I never review. It's just kind of a sickness, I'm sorry. But it applies to pretty much everything you write that I have read, (including this!) and that is pretty much my blanket disclaimer.

I'm just gonna go now and stop sounding like such a stalker.

Ciao.
Lisa-chan
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
Omg i loved it!
SEQUAL plz!
eclipseofmyheart76
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
OMFG! SO CUTE! I cant stop smiling! I love Doel! AW SO CUTE SEQUAL! PLEASE!:(
greenfiend03
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
Okay wow. Just WOW! I LOVE Doel and this fic was AMAZING! I can't get over how AWESOME it is! Some serious slash goodness and yet the characters are still in character! You are a GENIUS, and you must write more! I LOVE your sense of humour and your style of writing, it's just so much fun to read! The plot itself was genius alone, and you totally managed to make it even better than it seems! I bow down to you and your writing, and tastes in ships. Doel is definitely the hottest lwd slash ship! I seriously must read this again because it's so freaking amazing! Thank you SO MUCH for writing this!
animeHrmIne
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
I LOVED this story. So cute, and IC enough to work. Two thumbs up!

animeHrmIne
=^;^=
unoriginal-elizabeth
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
OMG - I think I'm high on this crackfic :) I love the plot and the complicated dynamics (yay for fic that doesn't brush Casey under the carpet!). You win - have an internet :)
MaybeBaby27
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
I let out a giant giggle at the end of this. I think this is one of the first (if not THE first) Noel/Derek fics.

I love it. You should keep going with this. Just to see what happens. ;D
InspirationNowOnHiatus
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
HAHAHA..oh my gosh this is one of the best fics I've read in a while! Simply amazing! Can you write a sequel! Pretty please? Love this. Great job! 8D
Sofa King Stupid
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
This is definitely deserving of a follow up. ...please?

In any case it was excellent, and the characterization was so spot on it was spooky. Good spooky.

My one complaint- there was not nearly enough making out. :) Try harder next time! (or else)


MN
Clare DeTamble
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
*squeals* I love it! Sequel??
StrongWriter
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
GAH.

I love this. You're amazing! XD The entire thing made me giggle :3

THANKYOU
RogueSam
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
I really, really liked this. Everyone was very in-character and it had great dialogue. Keep writing!
PinkJelly
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
BAHAHAHAHAHA. SO MUCH WIN.

You are a genius. Your characterization of everyone was perfect, and the dialogue is stunning. Very very nice job :)
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