Hmm, sad...TT_TT

A great story. Very good.

After someone reviews one of my stories, I do the same thing back. :)

I don't really go for Caspian/Susan stories, (somehow I end up writing them, however) but this was really good. I don't see many fanfics themed towards why Susan left. It's great to see something new, instead of the same old tired plots. It was worded beautifully, and there were some nice lines that really stood out here and there.

As for criticism, my only complaint that something nice as this was soo short. Though, I would try putting in one of those spiffy little lines this site has created, to differentiate the authors note from the actual story, or something else.

This was a very nice oneshot! Great job. :)

Wow...I really like it. It was interesting to see Susan's point of view about her leaving and not coming back.