I just love reading this story whenever I'm in one of my moods, it always cheers me up. Wonderful story! :)

FANTASTIC story! I loved it. I loved Mamoru's internal snarkiness...great lines.

Personal favorite:
“I am Tuxedo Kamen, and I do not have time to deal with you right now.”

WONDERFUL job!


DM

very nice :) it is a very rare thing to be able to get inside a guy's head (coz, really, who understands them anyway?) and make everything he thinks and feels seem real and makes you want/like him all the more. and you did an awesome job of it.

Totally loved it! As always, this story has evoked extreme emotions from me. You had me laughing and furious and bawling my eyes out in the ten or so minutes it took for me to read through the whole thing.

Tremendous job, Ali, as always.

By the way, sorry to have disappeared on you. It's been, what, a year or so since my last email? And I haven't even had the chance to read Gentleman yet, and I've nagged you countless times to post it. And when you finally do, I faze into oblivion. :)

Anyway, I'll email you soon. Expect it to come from an unfamiliar address, since I'll probably be emailing from work. We have to catch up!

haha, this was pretty cute. loved how you went through the holidays and described how they got closer and closer. do up another one! that would be so cool!

-luna

Aw :D happy ending!

beautiful simply beautiful! i can't wait to read more of your suff!

Great story
love it<3

this was a great read and not what i was expecting lol. can't wait till another one of your oneshots :D

So freaking good.

I was hankering for some angsty but not too angsty, with a touch of jealous Mamoru, Sailor Moon fanfiction. No lie I was in the middle of checking mail when the craving hit out of now where. I haven't even read fanfiction in forever.

And this story hit that craving spot on. I loved every moment of it. I see you have written it quite a bit ago . My only regret is that I didn't read it sooner.

Spot on. Love.

I swooned. I don't think people use that word anymore but that's what I did several times during the story. Oh, explanation first why this review is coming at a strange time - I've saved your long stories for when I need them. Not in the best of moods this evening, but I had like one hour completely open so I made use of the opportunity to read this in one sitting. Anyways, onwards with the actual review:

I love your Mamoru-voice! I've loved it before, like with Winning Love (that must have been like 10 years ago) and a few others where it wasn't first-person but was still told by him anyways (Er, On Impulse? And the one with Venus' daughter at the arcade threatening Usagi's life?). The sarcasm is great. The passive-aggressive, shy, almost pathetic-but-it's-okay-because-it's-Mamoru voice. I'd like to believe that this IS how Mamoru thinks in the anime and we just never got to see it. One favorite line amongst many: the "Gold star for the cape", these subtle little remarks made me like the story and Mamoru that much more. Motoki was great as always ("she'll be married, and you'll be screwed"). Too cute. I almost like your stories from Mamoru's point of view more than Usagi, when the 'fic is less plot-driven and more romance-driven. Aiko's introduction was great and character-revealing - he comes on to the scene as a perfect super hero even though he isn't. Oh, and when Usagi first introduced Aiko to Mamoru, that was fun to read because, as if it's not bad enough she's flirting with this guy in front of Mamoru, but she's also treating Mamoru in the very opposite way simultaneously. Oh, and last thing, props for making Usagi and Aiko's relationship proceed the way teenagers' relationships should (a week before hand-holding and two and half weeks before a first kiss, I think it was?). Fits my old-fashioned concept of dating perfectly. Even if they weren't teens, I think there's a certain extra romance to be enjoyed and cherished when couples take things slowly (I am a prude). Anyway, I'm happy that I got to read this and am sad that it's out of my queue and I can't use it to combat mild depression the next time that hits me. Thanks for the story!

Oh, and update Grimm 2 please. Thank you.

Omg! So sweet! I really thought that that was the most adorable thing ever!

beautiful! =) so hearty and innocent and just achingly beautiful. =)

Even if you messed with using Motoki AND Andrew, it still was a sweet story. Yours stories never cease to amaze me. Happy writing.

that was cute. really liked it