|Reviews for The Price of Balance|
| userunknown123 4/15/10 . chapter 1
Elizabethan-tx rec'd this to me over on twitter...LOVE IT! Great start, cant wait to read more! SO curious about E!
| elizabethan 4/14/10 . chapter 15
Oh, poor Bella - she doesn't want to think of Edward suffering, and neither do I. Love how Jasper comforted her and encouraged her to fight. He truly is an Angel of Valor.
Oh, it truly was as if he never existed - the apartment, the hospital, her job... but oh, it was a surprise to have Alice reappear. Why am I crying over Alice's scarf analogy?
*Gasping* Esme's son? Alice's words - "altering the pattern" - oh yes!
"So the stars had aligned, and on the one night of the week that I had off, I was going to dinner at the Cullen residence - to meet a man I didn't even know existed." - "as if he never existed" - wow, what a turn.
Spring - "rebirth" - seeing Edward in Esme & Carlisle's home - I cannot read through my tears *wipes eyes* Oh my, it really is him, and he remembers - *stops to let tears fall in earnest*
Avery, thank you so much for this beautiful story. I can't tell you how glad I am to have been here for so many chapters. I would like to think there is an epilogue in the works, but I suspect you are comfortable with where you're leaving these characters.
Congratulations on the completion of your story, and thank you for sharing your gift with your readers.
| halconmia 4/14/10 . chapter 1
Very intriquing first chapter and am so mad I have to stop reading and go to work tonight. I know what I will be doing when I get home though LOL.
| HuSingLover 4/14/10 . chapter 15
Thank you for such a lovely and touching story. It was just perfect...perfect! There is nothing more to say! PERFECT! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent.
| LittleMoCullen 4/14/10 . chapter 15
*wipes tears away & sniffels* I loved it, It was beautiful thank you for sharing your fic
| StarryNightT 4/13/10 . chapter 15
"...they were answered by a lovely angel sitting on the edge of my tub, knitting a scarf." - Have I mentioned before how much I LOVE Alice?
I'm sad this story is over! :( But I'm ELATED that it had a VERY happy ending! XD As soon as Esme showed up in the coffee house and said the word "son" I got the biggest most ridiculous grin on my face. So THAT'S what Alice ment! I do believe it worked out for the best ;D Plus Edward plays HOCKEY. HOT. I don't know why, but the image of him playing hockey is just... so very nice. (WHICH I WHY I AM IN. LOVE. WITH THIS NEW STORY CALLED 'TAKE THE ICE' BY BELLAMARIE117. It's SO good, Christi!) Anyway, I absolutely loved this story! I DO hope you decide to write another one sooner or later ;)
| LoveEqualsEDWARD 4/13/10 . chapter 15
I've read approximately 680 fanfics on this website in the last 2 years and this ending has got to be my absolute favorite, ever. So lovely and so inspirational. I even got misty-eyed as I read.
That was a job well-done. :)
I'm gonna miss AngelWARD but do hope (please say yes, please say yes) that you'll soon be inspired to give us a continuation story featuring the "man with the heart of an angel" and his Bella.
What say you?
I'd love to know what became of their happily-ever-after.
| Meghan Bailey 4/13/10 . chapter 15
Fabulous. Wonderful. There are simply not enough adjectives to describe the story. Well done and well written! Congrats and can't wait to see what you come up with next.
| WeDon'tFightFair 4/13/10 . chapter 15
This was such a beautiful chapter :') Yes, I cried ;D
| Canyaceme 4/13/10 . chapter 10
I'm not a very visual person. I've never had the ability to visualize something that I've read. I see it in generalities but I have to tell you that the way you write, your descriptions, etc., allows me to see and feel the interaction of Edward with Bella. I can see the love in his eyes as he looks at her, feel it in your description of him wrapping her within his wings. I can see and feel the heartache as well with his internal fight to stay with Bella. Not sure what you do differently, but, thank you. I didn't expect all of this emotion when I started the story but I love it!
| Becklezbee 4/13/10 . chapter 15
I loved it!
| lovetheL 4/13/10 . chapter 15
it was wonderful! from beginning to end! thank you for that!
| turquoisebutterfly 4/13/10 . chapter 15
Bittersweet moment. I am so sad it is over but at the same time so happy for E and B and the way they found each other again. That was beautifully done, perfect ending. Thank you so much for sharing, this is one of my favorite Twific stories ever.
| Canyaceme 4/13/10 . chapter 6
Really enjoying the story. Sounds a little like The City of Angels with Meg Ryan and Nicholas Cage. Just please tell me it's not going to end like that movie!
| lovetheL 4/13/10 . chapter 3
Falling in love in a laundry mat over tinker bell panties. yeah, i swooned. ]