I really like it! It is different from other stories I have read where sookie is totally taken by eric. Here she is in live pain for bill even when Eric is with her in bed. Good thing Eric knew how to use the situation to show her that he cares for her. Love ur story.

I am so glad I found your work, I am going to read them all! This, to me, was a perfect way to write a lemon. Sensous and very sexy but not at all step by step and gynecological.

Well done, I loved it.

*sigh* the way it SHOULD have been... I loved it )

Bravo... Love it.

I like It! kind of dark...love it.

Loved it! It was wonderfully written and you nailed Eric.

Magnificent. You definitely kept Eric in character wonderfully, which as we all know, is NOT an easy thing to do. And I like how you kept true to Sookie as well. At that point in the books, she wasn't all ERIC! And she had more resistance to him. I like how you had her still thinking of Bill, because it's simply unrealistic for her to just shove Bill aside from her thoughts at this point. Wonderful!

wow... if only sookie had gotten that closure before her trip to new orleans! gotta love brutally honest eric :)

loved it

Wow, this was a wonderfully written story, and I like the timeframe that you used to set it in, too.

Very well written, please write more.

Ah, if they had only come together (no pun intended) sooner than when he was cursed! This was a very interesting look at that possibility. Well written and you did well with their voices. I feel bad for Sookie. I think at that point she still loved Bill so much; she was so confused. I hope you write some other Southern Vampire pieces!

Aw, I like it :) Very well written

Enjoyed it! I think Eric probably would have reacted a little differently but it was still good!

very very good! Eric was so tender. Perfect! Keep it up!