^_^ its nice ^_^ and funny poor arf and lol FATE haha

That was adorable. X3 You should go ahead with the sequel you're thinking about writing if you want. Overall, good character interaction in this one.

There were some dialogue lines that needed quotation marks at the end.

Correction:

“It’s a earmuff." an.

XD This story made me laugh out loud. And of course, earning myself weird glances from my housemates. But then, I don't really care about the weird glances. Will be waiting for the sequel :D





PS: Signum saying lovey-dovey and mushy wushy is a total crack XD And Zafira laughing... Priceless. Poor Arf though D:

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That was so cute. *hearts* I loved it. XD

And the Arf thing was hilarious. Ay, now I'm dying on the inside. ...I have to write something.

Later. :D

Lol! this is another hilarious one! i love every moments in it!
as always, you are so good at writing such a sweet every-day-lives fic -i ought to have toothache-. =DD

you're planning a sequel?? oho, give it to me! Lol!
well, all d best for u, Cheers!

-darkenez0_o

Lol, that was cute. Fate's apology was adorable, but poor Arf haha.
Hope you update with that sequel soon. xD

LOL
Nice fic, I love your characterization of Fate and Nanoha, they were lovely and fun. The 'forgive me' scene was really great.

>I’m thinking of writing a sequel for this, entitled Ten Ways To Make Your Girlfriend Happy
Yes, please! I wonder what Nanoha wrote in that book... please overcome the evil lazy-ness and write the continuation ^^

Hahahahahahaha.

Poor Fate. Why do you and Aki always pick on her? XD;

(Still not going to write anything. ;D)

That was a really cute piece, me like it. :)
Please continue with "Ten Ways to Make Your Girlfriend Happy".
Thanks and PPMS.

all i could say is, " cute, cute, cute and a heck lot more of cuteness!!" nyahaha.. me likey.. thanks for the smiles! ^^

Oh really, Fate-chan is hopeless without her Nanoha.

Just one word “annoying” and her mood changed completely, and Fate-chan knew exactly why her girlfriend was mad at her. The last part, when Nanoha gave Fate-chan that book, I can imagine her expression like “I’ll have to do this or else…” face. Don’t mess with your Nanoha-chan.

Nice work.

Wait. Wasn't Fate already wearing pink ribbons after the exchange on the bridge in the first season?
^See, criticism! (Sort of, anyway. :P)

But poor poor Fate. Having her life so screwed up just because Nanoha's angry at her.

And Fate's speech... I burst out in laughter too. XD

I still think Arf ought to have spoken though. She's utterly humiliated in this fic(despite your love for her) except for poking Fate in the beginning.. poor Arf. D:

Still. This is great. And like everyone else also says, you ought to keep writing. :D

Not surprisingly, I laughed. But no one's home, so that's okay. XD I apologize beforehand if this review does not come out as coherent as I want it to be, because... Well, I find myself laughing or chuckling when I re-read your sentences. XDD

And let me just say that, this fic is probably the first fic I've read where Bardiche spoke so much. He actually spoke more than 10 words! Go Bardiche!
On the other hand... Arf did not speak at all.

Hm... Fate-chan is -that- hopeless without Nanoha? XD No coffee, late to work, and unkempt uniform... I actually felt really bad for Fate.

Of course, I felt even worse for Arf when Fate forced pink on her. And Zafira actually laughed. At her. Her wolf pride is gone. All gone. XD

By the way, "Arf clearly did not want to be here. The wolf growled, resisted, and trashed."
I think you meant thrashed?

Nakamachi Tanoha. -smirks-
And it's a -book- which I imagine to be anywhere from 30 to 100 pages? Haha. Awesome. The busy instructor actually took the time to write something like that.

Anyway, random thoughts I had while reading...

"“Why not? I think she’s cute,” Nanoha defended, clearly misinterpreting Arf’s attempts to escape as a happy dance, or something."
I found this hard hilarious. Happy dance. HAHA. Oh... Poor Arf. XD

"“In fact, I was thinking that you could use some pink in your life…” Nanoha trailed off meaningfully, brandishing yet another pink ribbon."
-Brandishing- yet another pink ribbon. Ahh, the pink ribbon of doom. XDD

"“So you insult me without thinking?”"
Funny, sounds like something I would say. XD

"Fate really didn’t know what to think, so she took the easy way out and didn’t think at all."
I actually had to re-read this sentence twice to make sure I had read correctly. Hah, yup, that's the best thing to do.


So anyway, to end off, another hilarious fic. I fully enjoyed it! You need to be in your writing mood more often. Heh.

I laughed so much, probably because I'm not much of a pink person. Poor Fate, no cuddling? Blasphemy! That was the best make up speech ever though. I'm looking forward to the sequel, that book looks so very interesting. I'm sure Fate would want to talk to the author. -.-'

This is great, I really enjoyed this one ^^ Keep up the good work