A very interesting premise, well written. Yes, I would like it to be continued. I'd like to hear the others' points of view. It's not like them to be so close-minded. Please do continue.

Very original, very imaginative. I don't know what made the AI team so mean or where the poison came from but really, I don't need to know, you convinced me of all that just by the way you wrote it. Unless you want to write a sequel, of course. Which would be good too. Nice one.

Here's some hopefully constructive feedback: You're obviously a good writer, your pacing's great and you convey atmostphere very well. But what is this story about exactly? There are too many themes and it's so far away from the show canon that the characters become less interesting. Why would the FG fight Angel to the death? You mention Buffy, but what about her? Why does Angel fall in love with Faith? Why was Faith let out of prison? Who poisoned her? Murdering Gunn is a huge deal without any real exposition and makes for a very unsympathetic story. Your writing is very expressive but the plot ran away with you and I didn't find Angel in character. I'd love to re-read this story when it's been updated though.