Well written and sweet. I chuckled at the reference to Ouran High School Host Club. I thought it was funny that she decided that Bleach would be a boring read. I also wondered why Ichigo wasn't insulted by her comment about it since his picture was on the cover.

Aw . That was cute . And ew . No . Twincest ?

They both have a crush on Haruhi , do they not ?

Good job in writing this though

Ehehe, not bad! I like it!

well now...this was funny, light, yet sensual. I like it!

Aw, that was cute. I have recently just gotten into Bleach and I'm already obssessed with Ichigo and Rukia as a couple. I want to try and write my own Bleach fic too, but first I think I'll familiarize myself with all the characters more.

Anyways, nice story! )

Luv4Knux

I liked it a lot!

Now I'm grinning like a fool.

HA! looks like Ichigo did prove Rukia wrong!

cute, i liked it. especially...

And in Karin’s room I found something called ‘Bleach’ and it’s got a picture of you on the cover of the first one. I declared it boring and decided not to read it.

That deffinetely made me, laugh, a lot for some reason...still laughing actually. but anyways good job!

Well, as a fellow IchiRuki person, I say, well done. Just the way they fight in the show is enough to convince me that somewhwere down the line, they'll kiss. XD

My one complaint is that it was too short, but that's the way it usually is with one-shots. This reminds me that I need to watch episode 6 again.

Anyway, good fic. Short, but still good.

That was really good! I love Ichigo and Rukia together, I've always thought they would make a good couple. I think your portrayed Rukia really well. (:

oh my gosh it was a good fic write more please.

love,

catlover

Congrats on your first fluff fic! It was pretty good, although I know nothing about Bleach. XD